If you don't know the plot of Codename: Winterborn, you shouldn't have anything to worry about.
However, that being said, please read the book already.
Anyway, the prologue to the next Finn and Yoskowitz novel, Codename: Unsub, is below the break. Let me know what you think. While I have no problem with you pointing out errors (crowdsource editing ... works for me), and if you decide to lynch me for a few errors, well, I'm writing three books at the same time, doing most of the copy editing, line editing, proofing, while also being the primary marketer, and maintaining a blog that posts once if not three times a week. When you do the same, let me know.
Editing help, good. Heckling? Bad.
More below the break.
When he had first arrived, Kevin felt like an anthropologist studying a group of cannibals, studying the interactions between various groups. Playing one group against another could be the key between observing the cannibals one more day and being the next one on the menu. The law of San Francisco was libertarian philosophy grown to total absurdity. Instead of “do what you will, and do no harm,” you can do whatever you will, as long as you don't inconvenience too many people while doing it.
Kevin had a few more things to do that night. To start with, he had a whole bunch of priests to bring in…